Off Target · Jonathan Lloyd

Chapter 1

Foxtrot 2-1 Charley

Security was tight, the air thick with silence, broken only by the weak flicker of the dying lightbulb.

Colonel Camilla Bentley sat at her desk, her eyes fixed on the chessboard in front of her. Every piece stood in perfect order, as if waiting for her next move.

Beside her, a thin file marked "Top Secret" lay untouched. Her fingers brushed the bandage wrapped around her thigh, hidden beneath her trousers. The wound was a silent reminder—a knife twisted deep to amplify the pain. The memory hit her with a surge of sharp anger.

She hadn’t seen it coming. The Russian agent had struck fast, too fast. For a split second, Camilla thought it was the end. But she’d reacted, just in time. Enough to pull her pistol and end it with a single shot.

She shifted in her seat. Days as an Oxford professor, lecturing on advanced electronics and cyber security, felt like a lifetime ago. Now, her job was complex: uncover why government military contracts failed—and fix them. No manual existed for this line of work.

The door creaked open. Colonel Ben Johansen ducked in, a towering presence, all muscle and silent menace. The kind of man who could tear someone apart with a stare. He glanced at the chessboard, then moved the Queen beside the King.

“Checkmate, Camilla, ” Ben muttered, a slight smirk shining from his good looking face.

Camilla didn’t bite. She wasn’t in the mood for games.

Before she could respond, Major Eric Hatley entered, quiet and deliberate as always. He slid into a chair, eyes flicking to the chessboard.

"Who's winning? " Eric’s voice was calm, as always.

Ben laughed, his voice loud. “Me, obviously!”

Eric raised an eyebrow but said nothing. He wasn’t buying it.

Camilla remained silent, watching them. They were her team, her support—but they didn’t need to see the sadness escalating inside her.

Then Harrier stepped in. Her gaze landed on the unopened file. “What’s the latest, boss?”

Ben leaned back, grinning. “Alright, who’s on the hit list today?”

Eric and Harrier chuckled, familiar with Ben’s thirst for action. He thrived on adrenaline, always enthusiastic for a fight.

The banter flowed, light and familiar. But Camilla felt the weight of the mission squeezing her tight. She couldn’t shake the feeling this one was different. Dangerous. No one else saw it yet, but the pieces were in play—and someone was about to make a lethal move.

Camilla cut through the tension. "Maxley Scientific."

Eric raised an eyebrow. "Aren't they a contractor for the Ministry of Defence?"

"Spot on Eric. They were given £400 million to build a torpedo that would be a game-changer for the British Navy. For some reason, it's off target—can't sink a thing to save its life. And team Foxtrot 2-1 Charlie needs to find out why. " Camilla’s voice was sharp with purpose. "The Navy's running trials on a remote island off the top of Scotland. You need to get me there, Eric. And Ben, I need you watching everyone, knowing what they’re up to."

Ben chuckled, his eyes bright with excitement. "Finally! We get to punch someone."

Camilla half-smiled, nodding slightly. She knew Ben’s capabilities well. When his cross hairs set on a target it doesn’t end well for most.

"We need a base near Maxley, Eric. And eyes and ears all over that company twenty four-seven, Ben. It's battle stations everyone". Camilla’s tone left no room for debate.

Ben’s chair scraped loudly as he stood. "I’m on it!" he said with his usual directness.

Eric nodded. "I’ll make some calls, get transport sorted. Rough estimate—two hours."

Camilla turned to Harrier. "Dig up everything you can on everyone at Maxley. Start going through it with Ben. Message me if anything jumps out."

The room fell silent as the team filed out, an air of silence crept back into Camilla’s awareness. "Won't miss this place," she muttered to herself.

As she stood, the sharp pain in her leg flared up, her face tightening for a moment. Greg’s image flashed in her mind—his lifeless body cradled in her arms. She had loved him secretly, and his death had left a wound deeper than the one in her leg. Shaking herself from the memory, she focused on the chessboard in front of her.

The Chess board, a relic from her grandfather, had always been her compass during dark times. Underneath, the signature read "Love, Grandad Bentley." Slowly, she packed it away, her thoughts shifting to the mission ahead.

She grabbed the thin Top-Secret file, knowing it wouldn't stay light for long. Determined to get to the bottom of the mystery at Maxley, feeling solace her team could get to the bottom of it. Grabbing her bags, she headed out of the room.

In front of her, the base buzzed with activity. Computer stations were tangled in cables, with no regard for health and safety—Eric never had time for that, always ready to move at a moment’s notice.

Eric approached, "Helicopter's arriving in eighteen minutes. It’s going to be a rough flight—storms all over the UK. Jack’s going with you as a bodyguard."

Jack stood nearby, tall and imposing, already holding his bag, ready for whatever lay ahead.

Both Jack and Camilla stood outside, the light rain splashing on the ground—just another dreary day in England. The low growl of the helicopter grew louder, breaking through the clouds. Camilla tightened her grip on her bag, bracing herself for the force of the downdraught. As the helicopter landed, she leaned into the wind. The door swung open, and the oad-master reached out to help her in. Camilla accepted the hand, but when it was Jack’s turn, he waved the help away, climbing in on his own.

The helicopter rattled through the storm, buffeted by winds that matched Camilla's inner turmoil. She stared out the window as the grim silhouette of the building below faded into the distance. "Another chapter closed," she thought. A tear slid down her cheek. There was no escaping the past, no escaping Greg. For the next few hours, she needed to stay busy. Anything to avoid the memories that threatened to crush her.

The island loomed below as they descended. Cold, salty air slapped her face the moment the door opened. Rugged cliffs framed by relentless waves. Perfect for the Ministry of Defence's secret trials, hidden away from the world. As she trudged towards the Head Quarter's building, Camilla caught sight of the Motor Torpedo Boats (MTBs) docked under cover, their grey hulls camouflaged in the water. Something felt off.

Inside the HQ, warmth and the sterile smell of new construction greeted her. Jack moved ahead, always alert, always ready. Camilla trusted him with her life. The base commander, a tall figure named Harry, greeted them, his presence commanding yet non-threatening.

"Welcome, Dr Bentley, " Harry said. "We’ve set up a briefing to get you orientated. Follow me."

Camilla and Jack followed. Jack a vigilant shadow. They entered the briefing room where files, tea, and sandwiches were already laid out. Harry wasted no time explaining the base layout, detailing the number of MTBs and their crews.

"I want to interview all the MTB commanders today and inspect MTB-7," Camilla said, her tone commanding but polite.

Harry nodded. "We can arrange interviews today and tomorrow, we’ll take you to the firing range."

Jack, always protective, jumped in. "How dangerous?"

Harry smiled slightly. "A helicopter ride to the command ship, then a mini-sub to the range. You'll be in the safest of hands."

Camilla cut to the heart of it. "The torpedoes don’t work. Why?"

Harry’s expression hardened. "Because they don’t. The crews here are the best in the Navy. We’ve gone over this from every angle."

Camilla nodded but remained sceptical. She had learned long ago not to rely on anyone’s word. Trusting only her eyes, she would investigate every detail herself.

The first MTB commander entered the briefing room, confident, almost too much so. Camilla's recorder was on, capturing every word. She opened with the obvious question again, direct and sharp. "Why don’t they work?"

The commander shrugged, casual. "They just don’t."

"Why do you blame the manufacturer?" Camilla pressed.

"Our part’s simple. Point and shoot. We point, we shoot, and they miss."

Every commander she interviewed repeated the same line, maybe true maybe a rehearsed. Frustration gnawed at her. It felt like she was hitting a wall, the same answers with no insight. The burden of the day settled in, the strain of hearing the same empty words.

She stood, "That’s it for today," she said, her voice flat. Harry, the base commander, smiled politely.

"I’ll have my assistant Pamela show you to your quarters. Jacks in the room next door."

They all rose, Pamela leading the way. A gust of wind caught the door, the cold air hitting Camilla’s face, jolting her back to full awareness. She said nothing, just followed silently, exhaustion pulling at her limbs. The room they gave her was warm, spacious, and oddly comforting. The décor matched the calm, the bedding soft, inviting.

Stripping down, Camilla winced as she removed the bandage from her thigh. It stuck to the wound, pulling painfully as it peeled away. The sting of the hot shower hit next, but it eased the ache in her muscles. The warm water flowed over her, numbing the day’s tension.

Her eyes grew heavy as she dressed the wound again, exhaustion dragging her under. The moment her head touched the pillow, sleep gripped her.

The next morning, the weather outside was bleak, grey clouds hanging low, threatening a storm. The air felt tense, and Camilla sensed something had shifted overnight. As she entered the officer’s dining area, the presence of their stares followed her. Conversations halted, and whispers trailed behind her, thick with suspicion. Whatever had changed, she knew she was at the centre of it. That didn’t bother her. It meant a fire had been lit.

She sat down at an empty table, catching the eye of the waiter. “I’m starving, I’ll have a full English breakfast,” she said.

The waiter smiled. “It’s full Scottish here, ma’am. Haggis, not black pudding.”

Camilla smirked. “Alright, full Scottish then, but skip the haggis.”

With a nod, the waiter darted off, moving with purpose. Camilla settled into her seat, knowing her hunger wouldn’t last long. Moments later, Jack appeared, freshly dressed and clean-shaven, his energy unmistakable.

“Did you get a good night’s sleep?” he asked.

Camilla gave a small smile. “Yes, thank you.”

The dining room buzzed with the sound of clattering cutlery as officers ate their breakfast. Camilla leaned forward. “First stop—inspection of the MTBs.”

Jack raised an eyebrow, feeling the inspection would be straightforward. “Unless you really need me there, I’ve got a long to-do list.”

She thought for a moment before nodding. “I’ll be fine. Be sure you give the crew of MTB-7 extra scrutiny.”

Jack returned a reassuring look.

Camilla left the officer’s dining room alone, stepping out into the crisp, salty sea air. Pulling her hood up, she made her way toward MTB-7, the wind tugging at her, trying to push her sideways.

MTB-7 sat sleek and invisible, blending in with the water. Camilla leaned in, inspecting the boat with a sharp eye. Her thoughts were broken by a tap on her shoulder.

She turned to see a male officer. His uniform was crisp, and his captain's insignia gleamed in the morning light.

She recognised him from yesterdays interviews. "What can I do for you? " Camilla asked, directly.

The Captain had a firm but friendly look, something that spoke of confidence and control. He wasn’t one to be easily swayed.

"I’m taking you on a tour of MTB-7, introducing you to my crew. After that, we’ll be going underwater for the torpedo tests."

Camilla’s mood shifted. The idea of action lit a spark in her. "I'm looking forward." she said, her tone friendly but laced with warning.

She noted how easily he kept pace with her. His calm and focus was impressive. She’d dealt with countless officers over the years, but this one wasn’t flustered. Not by her, not by the weight of the assignment. He had a grip on his world, and it showed.

As they moved toward the boat, Camilla probed, asking questions that seemed casual but were anything but. She wanted to know who he was, how he thought. His answers were precise, confident. He knew every inch of the MTB, and his tactical mind was sharp, cutting through any facade. This wasn’t just an officer. This was a man who could lead without cracking, someone built for a fight.

By the time they reached the boat, Camilla had crossed him off her list of suspects. He was too steady, too dedicated. The boat itself was a marvel—built for stealth, its sleek lines barely noticeable in the water.

As they boarded, the Captain offered his hand, a slight smile playing on his lips. His grip was firm, steady. She caught the flick of his eyes to her leg, the limp she tried to conceal. He saw everything but said nothing. Smart. Very smart.

Yet beneath his professionalism, there was a hint of humour, something subtle but undeniable.

The crew snapped to attention as Camilla stepped on board. Their respect for the Captain was immediate, almost palpable. This wasn’t your typical crew, and this wasn’t an ordinary mission. A sailor handed her a cup of coffee. She accepted, knowing the quality would reveal more than anyone could say outright.

The Captain guided her through the ship, every word marked with pride. When they reached the torpedo systems, he noticed her sharp focus. This wasn’t someone here to tick boxes—Camilla knew technology. She understood the systems like a veteran, catching details most would miss. The Captain adjusted, talking shop in a way few could. By the end of the tour, even he was impressed. Camilla wasn’t just another investigator; she was sharp, direct, a force in her own right.

Lunch on board was a break from the intensity. Camilla cracked a joke about upgrading her usual lunch spots, comparing them to the spread laid out before her. The crew laughed, and the tension loosened, if only for a while. But everyone knew the real test was still coming.

They lifted off again, heading for the torpedo firing range. The target—a decommissioned battleship called the Sir Evender—now just a rusting relic resting on the seabed. This was where the torpedoes had to perform or face another failure. No room for errors.

They arrived on the control ship overseeing the test. A ladder led down to a floating deck where the mini-sub was docked. The sub was bright orange, chunky, and industrial—nothing sleek about it. Camilla climbed in first, then, with a smirk, extended a hand to the Captain. He met her gaze, playing along as he took her hand with mock seriousness.

Camilla smiled to herself. She might’ve found a worthy chess partner in this Captain. The only problem? He might be good enough to humiliate her.

The sea slapped against the sides of the mini-sub, making it hard for Camilla to stay steady on her feet. She was guided to a seat by a window, her eyes catching the surprisingly clear water outside. Everyone else buckled in. She glanced down, finding her seatbelt.

The sub’s pilot turned, offering a quick smile. “Good afternoon, mam. I'm Gary.” He pointed to the monitors beside her. “These will show the torpedo’s path. We’ve got four external cameras—so you'll be able to see the dive, the target, everything.” His finger moved to another screen. “This one’s all about the technical data once the torpedo’s en route.”

The hatch clamped shut with a metallic thud. Camilla felt her ears pop as the sub pressurised. Gary turned back to his controls. There was a sharp clank as the grab released the sub, leaving it free to descend into the depths.

The mini-sub glided downwards, cutting through the darkening waters with ease. Everything inside was sleek, state-of-the-art. It felt like she was in the heart of a high-tech lab, but the sense of danger was inescapable. Beyond the glass, the ocean stretched out—silent, unknown, and hostile.

Camilla’s eyes flicked to the monitors. The tension in her chest matched the slow, steady descent. This was more than just another test. Something told her the real challenge was waiting far beneath the surface.

The pressure inside the sub was palpable. Camilla felt it throughout her body.

“Target depth reached—250 feet,” Gary shouted, his voice steady over the hum of the controls. “Heading to the Sir Evender. Estimated time: six minutes.”

Camilla scanned the depths through the window, surprised at how far she could see. Gary’s voice broke the silence again. “Sir Evender coming into view.”

She saw it—the massive guns on the sunken battleship’s deck, a relic resting quietly on the seabed. It looked peaceful, untouched by time.

“We’re in position. Turning on the lights,” Gary said, his fingers dancing over the controls. The ship lit up in a ghostly glow, its form majestic even in its final resting place.

“Ready when you are, mam,” Gary said, turning to Camilla.

Camilla shifted forward, focusing on the torpedo specs on the monitors in front of her. “Fire when ready.”

Gary nodded and grabbed the radio. “MTB-7, your free to fire when ready.”

A crackled reply came through. “Roger that.” Moments later, “Torpedo away.”

Camilla’s pulse quickened. The data streamed in: speed—267 knots; software—fully operational. The torpedo came into view on the screen, cutting through the water like a bullet heading straight for the Sir Evender. Then, at the last second, it swerved. Missed the target.

Her mind shifted into high gear. “Time for an autopsy,” she said, her voice calm, but sharp with frustration.

Gary didn’t hesitate. He was on it. He scanned the sea bed, located the torpedo. The sub’s equipped with a mechanical arm reached out, clamping onto the torpedo and pulling it in for retrieval. Within a short time, they were back on the control ship.

The electronics lab was crude, but it would do. Camilla cleared the room, locking it down for her work. Alone with the torpedo, she traced a hand along its cool, smooth surface. Her fingers stopped at the manufacturer’s plate: Maxley Scientific.

She worked through the night, dissecting every inch, hunting for the flaw. Mechanically, it was perfect. Electronically, too. The fault wasn’t physical—it was buried in the software, hidden deep.

Maxley Scientific had answers, and Camilla intended to get them. That fortress of secrets had just become her next battleground.

Back in her room Camilla scanned the Maxley reports, her mind racing. She couldn’t make a move until everything was locked down. The Watchers needed to scope out Maxley. No blind spots. No surprises. The Movers had to set up a base for the team, get the logistics right, and ensure transport for her and the torpedo. Every step had to be flawless. This mission wouldn’t forgive mistakes.

But something else niggled her. The Captain of MTB-7 had been more than just competent. His tactical mind, the way he handled the crew—it was sharp, precise. He was wasted here, stuck on this outpost.

Foxtrot 2-1 Charley needed someone like him. She could accept people who were possibly better than her in certain ways. In fact she enjoyed it. Camilla wouldn’t let him slip away. Not when they were about to dive to crush depth in hostile waters investigating Maxley.

Camilla found the Captain at the bar, his eyes glinting with the kind of confidence that made her wary. She sat next to him, offering a formal smile, masking the storm inside her. The officer's lounge had an easygoing air, but beneath the jokes and laughter, everyone knew there was danger lurking just beyond the island’s safety net.

The Captain turned to her, his gaze sharp. "What's the story with your leg? Drunk accident or something more interesting?"

The question was casual, but she felt the scrutiny. He was measuring her, feeling her out. She smiled, cold and distant. "Ten men. One me."

His eyebrow flicked up, impressed. "Julian," he said, extending his hand. The handshake wasn’t just an introduction. It was an assessment.

Camilla noted the mark on his finger where a ring once sat. No ring, but a past. "You play chess?" she asked, the question loaded with purpose.

Julian smirked. "I’ve played a few games. You?"

"I’m interested in your tactics." Her voice lowered, the challenge clear.

Julian laughed softly. "Problem is, we don’t have a chess board."

Camilla leaned in, her eyes gleaming. "I never go anywhere without mine."

Minutes later, they found a quiet corner, away from prying eyes. She set up the board, the pieces worn but deliberate. Julian’s smile was too knowing, too confident. This wasn’t just a game. It was a test, and he was baiting her.

"My grandfather carved this board," she said, breaking the silence. "Pilot in the British Royal Air Force. Lost both legs in the war, but still flew missions after."

Julian’s eyes narrowed. "A hero. Tell me more."

Camilla obliged, but her focus stayed on the board. Julian’s moves were too precise. Not a single wasted motion. When he checkmated her, it wasn’t just a win. It was a message.

She hated being cornered, but there she was, pinned. Julian leaned back, smirking. "We playing again tomorrow?"

She nodded, feeling the weight of his victory. He had her in his sights now, and he wasn’t letting go. As he walked away, she watched, mind racing. What’s his angle? She needed to know, not just for the game, but because he was dangerous—and that might make him useful.

By morning, Camilla had Harrier on Julian's trail. She wanted everything—his history, connections, weaknesses. She didn’t trust easily, and she wasn’t about to change that.

The base, nestled on a remote Scottish island, should’ve felt secure. But something tormented her, like a shadow lurking just beyond reach. The wind outside howled, but it wasn’t the storm that unsettled her. It was the silence—the calm before something much darker.

The next morning, a sharp knock cut through the quiet. Camilla paused, her hand hovering near her holster. Another knock. She opened the door cautiously.

Next morning Camilla heard the sound of knocking on her door. She cautiously opened. It was Jack standing there, fresh-faced, eyes sharp. He stepped in without a word, scanning the room out of habit.

"Coffee?" she asked, fumbling with the jar.

"I'll pass," Jack grinned, his tone light. "I don't need caffeine." His smile faded. "Russian satellite came through again last night. Scanned us."

He handed her the report like it was routine. To him, it probably was.

"Any tampering with the torpedo?" Camilla's voice tightened. She didn’t trust the situation. Too much had gone wrong recently.

"It’s still in the box, x-ray-proof. Everything's secure."

Camilla nodded but didn’t believe it. Something didn’t sit right. The Ministry of Defence would act, right? Or would they miss the signs until it was too late?

Jack left to check the torpedo, and Camilla finished her coffee. She made a move over to HQ. Outside, the wind tore at her coat as she walked past the officers’ quarters. The sea crashed in the distance, and dark clouds rolled in, suffocating the island.

Her thoughts turned to Julian. She needed him on her team. But first, she had to deal with Harry, the MTB Commanding Officer. He wouldn’t give up his best man easily.

Inside the HQ, Harry scowled when she asked for Julian. They both knew what it meant to lose someone irreplaceable. Camilla kept her pitch short, just enough to get what she needed without tipping her hand. Harry finally gave in, reluctantly.

Later, she found Julian on the dock, inspecting his MTB.

“Captain,” she called, stepping up. “May I come aboard?”

Julian smirked. “No chessboard this time, mam?”

Camilla shot him a look. “Next time you try that, I’ll have you scrubbing the decks with your own toothbrush. Understood?”

“Understood, mam!” He couldn’t hide the gleam in his eyes, a challenge lurking there.

“Good,” she added. “The food on your MTB is better than the officer’s mess. But don’t let that slip. I need a private word.”

Julian led her to his quarters, grabbing coffee from the galley along the way. Once the door shut, Camilla dropped her usual banter. This was no time for games.

“The world’s a mess,” she started. She laid out just enough classified intel for Julian to grasp the stakes. He didn’t flinch. He saw the danger, understood it, and wanted in.

Camilla felt a weight lift, but she knew everything depended on Harrier’s background check. One wrong move could blow it all.

Back in her room, Camilla felt boredom creeping in like a predator. Her work on the island was done. Greg's memory hit her hard, and the tears came before she could stop them. She headed to the gym, needing to burn off the emotions.

Her next mission was clear—an Army base in Edinburgh, then down to Maxley Scientific in Leicester. But for now, she was stuck waiting. The Watchers were gathering intel at Maxley, while the Movers prepped a secure base. It felt like a game of chess, every move requiring precision, but the waiting frustrated her.

Ben had gone silent, a huge storm was nearing, and Camilla hated the feeling of being trapped. Jack was on edge too, itching to get off the island. Time slipped away, and the longer they stayed put, the more advantage the enemy gained.

Finally, Harrier’s call came through late in the evening. They had the green light to move. The storm was just miles away, howling closer. There was no time to waste. The helicopter roared to life in the distance. Camilla felt the pressure building, she was heading to Maxley.

Maxley swirled in her thoughts like a maze of secrets. She knew it would be worse than she imagined. The question wasn’t if there would be danger, but how much—and who would survive.